- The strongest evidence is my claim that everyone should live a healthy lifestyle because it leads to a happy more bright future. It's strong evidence because it pertains to everyone. Everyone wants to be healthy and fit. Health and fitness are the two most important aspects of a brighter future. Since my claim is good I'm going to come back to it multiple times during the course of my paper.
- My weakest evidence is my rebuttal which would be its not easy to live a healthy lifestyle.Most people now a days are lazy and don't have time to make healthy food or exercise properly. I will strengthen this part of my essay by telling the reader that you live a longer life if you stay healthy. I mean no one wants to live to only 25 I'm sure. You control what you eat so your health is on you.
Friday, April 6, 2012
Assignment #12
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