~ My final paper looks different from by draft because I added more detail about my actual writing process and less about soccer and my story. When we were doing peer review my classmates suggested that idea. I took their advise and my paper reads more smoothly now. I also corrected a couple run ons, fragments, and comma splices.
~ My paper was well organized for the most part and had a clear focus. It told a story how I developed as a writer and the steps I took to get there.
~ Yes, after revising I identified my own pattern of error. I've learned that I'm a little to wordy and had a couple comma splices here and there. I fixed my comma splices by limiting my wording and cutting the sentences down.
~ My revisions mostly came from peer review because it helps when someone else reads your paper. Since the writer already knows what they want to write and how they want their tone to be, its easier for them not to see mistakes in their own writing. On the other hand when someone else reads your writing they don't know what the tone is right away they have to keep reading.
~The strongest aspect of my essay is how I compare what I do on the field as a soccer player to becoming a strong writer. The weakest would be summarizing everything in the conclusion.
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